I dig the vibes from this but there’s a few big issues:

• The bass sounds midi as hell, like doom 1 level of computerization
• I had trouble mixing the drums, I dug how robotic those sounded but it was hard balancing it with the lead synth
• The Lead synth is cool as hell but really I would’ve rather a real distorted as hell guitar

Maybe I’ll go grab a crappy guitar and re-record this with real stuff to see if the problem is the lack of humanization or if it’s just a poorly thought out song in general. My bet is that once I try playing it, I’ll see some weirdness that will change the underlying song to be more of a real thing.